[Jifty-commit] r4610 - Jifty-Book/doc/Jifty/Book/Part-A

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Mon Dec 3 22:52:06 EST 2007


Author: nelhage
Date: Mon Dec  3 22:52:05 2007
New Revision: 4610

Modified:
   Jifty-Book/doc/Jifty/Book/Part-A/01-Introduction.pod

Log:
random typos I noticed on first reading

Modified: Jifty-Book/doc/Jifty/Book/Part-A/01-Introduction.pod
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--- Jifty-Book/doc/Jifty/Book/Part-A/01-Introduction.pod	(original)
+++ Jifty-Book/doc/Jifty/Book/Part-A/01-Introduction.pod	Mon Dec  3 22:52:05 2007
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 
 =head1 Web 2.0
 
-M<Web 2.0> is a term coined by Tim O'Reilly and basically means a second-generation web application. Many, including Tim O'Reilly, mark the "dot-com bust" of 2001 as the turning point from the failure of first-generation to the success second-generation of web applications. 
+M<Web 2.0> is a term coined by Tim O'Reilly and basically means a second-generation web application. Many, including Tim O'Reilly, mark the "dot-com bust" of 2001 as the turning point from the failure of the first-generation to the success of the second-generation of web applications.
 
 There's no specific factor that marks a web application as Web 2.0, but there are a few hallmarks. However, the largest single marker of a Web 2.0 application is advanced end-user participation. Such an application gives creative control over the use of the application to the end-users rather than more rigid control by the application's developers. The users help determine what the application is good for and, in a sense, help develop it.
 
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
 
 =head2 Features
 
-Jifty does this by providing many tools to the programmers kit:
+Jifty does this by providing many tools to the programmer's kit:
 
 =over
 


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